we put our film together after day 3 and well it
looked fine to us as we knew the roles but we used an audience to look over it
and evaluate it so we could make changes to anything that was badly shot or
didn't make sense. we discovered
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our barman was a bit random
•
there was not enough establishing
shots
•
how did our hero know they would
be there
•
how does the hero just walk in
we made extra things we could change, it would mean
shooting again but we had direction from a target audience on who would be able
to change the parts that were misleading.
our idea's where to shoot CCTV of the bar and show
how the hero is watching over them, taking notes making a plan. this would
increase the seriousness of the hero's plans and ability to track. much like a
cowboy tracking animals.
also in these CCTV clips we would show how the bar
threatens the barman and shows their dominance, again Oli will be displayed as
Theo's follower and does things for him as theo is more powerful and
dominating.
Then we also wanted to involve the entrance of our
hero before we see them targeting and beating up our victim. we decided it
would be good if the hero would come in the pub and enter, order a drink and
sit in the corner. they would be covered with a coat and a hoodie. they would
represent the layers of the hero concealed. after they enter he gets up takes
off the layers and makes his way over to where they are beating him up in the
back room.
there was also a flaw where actors laugh that we
missed, so we would look to re shoot that part aswell
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